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　　热点作文�?qi��ng)范�?相当有参考�h(hu��n)�?

　　一、低���与环保

　　构思点�?

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　　思维拓展

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　　高分范文

　　As is vividly depicted by the drawing above, a boy is sleeping soundly�?and comfortably in the sofa, with the television on, when his mother comes and turns off the television for him, blaming the boy for not having turned off the television again②�?

　　This phenomenon can easily be found anywhere in our daily life. Many people are used to doing�?everything with the television on, not actually watching it at all. Such a habit can cause waste of much electricity and energy, and result in the emission of carbon. This deviates from the popular concept of “low carbon life�?�?to reduce the emission of carbon, especially carbon dioxide, to protect our environment and realize sustainable development. According to statistics, if we can decrease the time for having the television on by one hour each day, we can deduce the amount of carbon emission by 4. 71 kilogram each month�?

　　To serve as responsible stewards of the planet�? we must promote and popularize a low carbon life among the public from every detail in our daily life. We must change the past practice of sacrificing long-term environmental health for short-term rapid economic development, and shift to developing green economy, circular economy and low carbon economy. All these effective measures can help us to reach harmony between development of the society and health of the nature�?

　　佳作妙译

　　如上囄���动地展示�Q�一个小男孩正在沙发上舒适地睡觉�Q�电(sh��)视还开着。这时候妈妈走�q�来帮他关了�?sh��)视�Q�责怪小男孩又忘了关�?sh��)视�?

　　�q�种现象在我们的生活中随处可见。很多�h�?f��n)惯于做什么事情都开着�?sh��)视�Q�实际上�q�不看。这�U�习(f��n)惯会(x��)��D���?sh��)力和能源的���费�Q�这�?x��)导致碳排放。这偏离了流行的“低���生�z�Z��的理念。低���生�z�L��指，减少���I�����其是二氧化���的排放�Q�以保护环境�Q�实现可持箋发展。根据统计数据，如果我们每天把开�?sh��)视的时间减���一���时�Q�则每个月可以减��?. 17千克的碳排放量�?

　　作�ؓ(f��)对地球负责�Q的管理者，我们必须在公众中推广�q�普�?qi��ng)低���的生活方式�Q�从日常生活中的每个�l�节开始。我们必��要改变��Z��获得短期的快速经���发展，牺牲长期的环境健��L(f��ng)��做法�Q��{向发展绿色经���、��@环经���以�?qi��ng)低���经���。所有这些有效的措施可以帮助我们实现�C�会(x��)发展与自然有序发展之间的和谐�?

　　名师点评

　　�?is sleeping soundly: 熟睡�Q�也可以表达�?A boy is fast asleep。“soundly and comfortably”这�c�d��词的加入�Q���得描�q�更生动�z�L���Q�而不是单调的主谓宾�?

　　�?A boy is sleeping soundly and comfortably in the sofa, with the television on, when his mother comes and turns off the television for him, blaming the boy for not having turned off the television again�?

　　该句��d���l�构是：(x��)A boy is sleeping, when his mother comes and turns off the television�?

　　�q�个句型的含义是�Q�一件事情正在发�?正在睡觉)�Q�突然发生了另一件事(妈妈来关�?sh��)�?�?

　　“with the television on”：(x��) with 引导的伴随结构，即A boy is sleeping, while the television is on. 也可以写成伴随状语A boy is sleeping, forgetting to turn off the television�?

　　“blaming the boy for not having turned off the television again”，�q�句是妈妈关�?sh��)视的伴随动作，一边关�?sh��)视�Q�一边责怪孩子忘记关�?sh��)视�?

　　囄���描述�q�句�Q�写得越�_�ֽ����好�Q�这句是先入��Z��的句子，也是阅卷老师重点看的句子�?

　　�?are used to doing: �?f��n)惯于做某事�Q���用短语表达，地道准确�?

　　�?to serve as responsible stewards of the planet:�q�是2005�q�真题阅��M��的原句，的文章里面的句型�Q�引用的标准��C���?

　　一般而言�Q�环保类话题�Q�都可以用这句话�Q�引出第三段的个�����论�?

　　历年真题是一座巨大的宝库�Q�我们一定要充分利用�Q��D一反三�?

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