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　　上图表现的是在“尚方宝剑”严惩的威严下，一位从事商业較赂的�����荒而逃。不�a�而喻�Q�这�q�图反映的是当今一�U�比较猖獗的�C�会现象�Q�商业較赂。深层次来讲�Q�就是道德问题、责任问题。本文的内容和结构安排如下：

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　　思维拓展

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　　高分范文

　　There is no doubt that this cartoon vividly depicts a negative but rampant scenario in modern society: commercial bribery. Frightened by the sharp punishment sword, the man, carrying a large pile of money used as bribery�? is trying his best to escape. What is conveyed by the drawing is both realistic and thought-provoking�?

　　The implication of the given picture can be elaborated in terms of the decline of work-moral values and the view on money. For one thing, commercial bribery has a very damaging and destructive�?effect on the whole society. Firstly, moral deficiencies as well as the humanity weakness revealed in the action of bribery�?may stain and pollute the atmosphere of professional ethics and cause others to copy. Secondly, fair competition may be threatened because bribery puts honest businessmen at a disadvantaged position. For another, the bad behavior of commercial bribery is largely driven by “profit”， showing that those people who are involved in bribery do not have a right view on money. It is true that money is indispensable�? but, there is no denying that money should be obtained and spent in a reasonable, wise and legitimate way�?

　　To eliminate the immoral behavior of bribery thoroughly�? drastic actions should be taken and severe punishment measures should be adopted. Besides, a positive mental guidance on the right attitude to money should be popularized among the public. Only in this way can we have a fair and sound social environment�?

　　佳作妙译

　　毫无疑问�q�幅漫画生动地描�q�C����C���C�会一�U�负面的但是却十分猖獗的现象�Q�商业較赂。由于惧怕严厉的惩罚�Q�这个�h背着一大堆贿赂用的��p��荒而逃。�O�ȝ��寓意是十分现实�ƈ发�h深思的�?

　　上图的寓意可以理解�ؓ详细阐述了在金钱冲击下职业道��L��沦陷。一斚w���Q�商业較赂对全社会造成恶劣的、毁灭性的影响。首先在贿赂行�ؓ中表现出的道��L��陷和人性弱点会破坏和污染职业道��L��氛围�Q�不良分子也会效�ѝ��其�ơ，行較者将破坏公��^竞争�Q�诚信经营的商�h被置于不利地位。另一斚w���Q�商业較赂行为大多是被利益驱动的�Q�这说明�q�些人对金钱没有正确的态度。没有金��q�����是万万不能的，但对待金钱，无疑需要取之有道，用之有度�?

　　��Z����d��栚w��贿赂�q�种道�d败坏的行为，应该采取严厉的惩�|�措施。另外，应该在公众中逐渐普及正确的金��p��。只有这��P��我们才能拥有公��^、健全的�C�会环境�?

　　名师点评

　　�?money used as bribery: �q�去分词作定�?定语从句�?

　　写过��d��词做定语的步骤：

　　�W�一步：写成定语从句�Q�money which is used as bribery;

　　�W�二步：省略引导词“which”和be动词“is”变成money used as bribery�?

　　�q�样�Q�一个定语从句就变成了过��d��词做定语�?

　　�?damaging and destructive: �q�义词叠用，押韵�Q�头�?

　　�?revealed in the action of bribery: �q�去分词作定语，修饰前面的moral deficiencies as well as the humanity weakness�Q�写法参考本文点评第�?条�?

　　�?It is true that money is indispensable: It作�Ş式主语，真正的主语是that从句�?

　　�?To eliminate the immoral behavior of�? ��Z��……。作目的状语�?

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