2017考研英語(yǔ)大作文：從真題出發(fā)看心態(tài)作文如何寫(xiě)

　　關(guān)鍵詞：考研英語(yǔ) 英語(yǔ)大作文 考研沖刺復(fù)習(xí)

》》英語(yǔ)55分保底直通通道

　　作文是考場(chǎng)上除了閱讀最重要的部分，也是這張?jiān)嚲砩献钊菀椎牡梅值牟糠?。所以，希望大家還是真心以待，真實(shí)寫(xiě)作為最可取。今天跨考教育高老師想和大家一起來(lái)說(shuō)說(shuō)考研作文這點(diǎn)事。我們以這個(gè)真題為例。

　　Directions: write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following drawing. In your essay you should

　　1) describe the drawing briefly

　　2) explain its intended meaning, and

　　3) give your comments

　　You should write neatly on ANSWER SHEET2.(20 points)

　　這個(gè)圖片是201年的真題，本題為現(xiàn)象闡述題型。一種普遍的現(xiàn)象通過(guò)漫畫(huà)展示出來(lái)，而且在漫畫(huà)中有明確的文字說(shuō)明，揭示了漫畫(huà)所反映的主題，在行文時(shí)需要對(duì)文章中所反映的現(xiàn)象進(jìn)行一定的描述，再給出對(duì)現(xiàn)象的評(píng)論和態(tài)度。大家在看的時(shí)候首先應(yīng)該立意，明確主題?？忌豢串?huà)，映入眼簾的是一瓶?jī)A倒在地上、嘩嘩流，對(duì)待這種現(xiàn)象旁邊的兩個(gè)人看法截然不同，一個(gè)人看上去很悲傷，一個(gè)人看上去依然樂(lè)觀。這幅畫(huà)折射出一個(gè)很重要的問(wèn)題：心態(tài)，即我們應(yīng)該怎樣去看待周?chē)氖澜?。這篇文章主要講的就是樂(lè)觀的生活、樂(lè)觀自信的態(tài)度去看待事物。第二步，我們就是對(duì)圖表進(jìn)行描述，描述的細(xì)節(jié)越是具體且貼近主題，分值就會(huì)越高。越是細(xì)節(jié)的東西越是可以反映個(gè)人的能力梯度。如下面?zhèn)€人覺(jué)得比較好的一段：As is unfolded in the cartoon above, in front of a knocked-over bottle of water with most water flowing out stand two men. One man, looking rather upset, says “There is nothing left. How unlucky I am!”, while the other one quickly picks up the bottle, saying “I am such a lucky dog, and there is still some still some left”. How vivid the cartoon is! The two men show quite different attitudes toward the same situation.

　　第二段可以從各個(gè)方面進(jìn)行論述，如比較、對(duì)比、舉例等手法都是可以的。第二段其實(shí)就是對(duì)第一段論點(diǎn)的闡述和論證。大家在敘述時(shí)保持論點(diǎn)清晰、論據(jù)分述。如此范文個(gè)人覺(jué)得寫(xiě)得還不錯(cuò)，拿來(lái)和大家共賞：Without any doubt, the purpose of the cartoon is to show us that we should keep optimistic no matter what circumstances we undergo. First and foremost, it is universally held that life is by no means perfect and in the course of life we are bound to experience and encounter a variety of difficulties. In order to achieve our goal, we should tackle the obstacles positively rather than in a negative way. In the second place, according to some research findings, a positive attitude does good to our life in that it will assist us in solving the tough issues.

　　最后一段一般都是會(huì)從解決問(wèn)題、總結(jié)論點(diǎn)、再次論述等，如From what has been argued above, we may reasonably arrive at the conclusion that we should embrace attitudes and behave confidently. Only in this way can we solve the issues confronting us successfully.