2017考研英語大作文：環(huán)保話題大作文你要這么寫

　　寫一篇作文有一篇作文的成就，寫十篇作文就會有十篇作文的成就。所以，我們今天在拿一篇文章進(jìn)行練筆。下面是2011年英語一的真題，大家首先來看一下：

　　Write an essay of 160---200 words based on the following drawing. In your essay, you should

　　1) describe the drawing briefly,

　　2) explain it’s intended meaning, and

　　3) give your comments.

　　Your should write neatly on ANSWER SHEET 2. (20 points)

　　本次大作文話題為大家一直比較關(guān)注的環(huán)保問題。環(huán)境問題在1991年、1999年以及2000年都曾經(jīng)考過，所以對各位考生來講并不陌生。而且2010年考查的文化與2002年考查話題一致，因此，話題復(fù)現(xiàn)是很自然的，這也提示了大家未來考生復(fù)習(xí)往年話題的重要性。文章采取總分總結(jié)構(gòu)。第一段描述圖畫，描述的內(nèi)容一定要與主題相關(guān)。與主題沒有關(guān)系的內(nèi)容盡量不要寫，一方面有湊數(shù)的嫌疑，另一方面，容易造成語法錯誤。如第一段The terrible scene depicted in the cartoon shows that some people in our daily life still lack the awareness of environmental protection. The picture illustrates that two tourists are chatting and eating happily on a boat and casually throwing their rubbish into the lake which is full of litter and waste. The drawing sets us thinking too much due to its far-reaching influence.

　　第二段揭示產(chǎn)生問題的原因，可以列舉2-3個理由。原因方面可以是直接原因，也可以是間接原因;或者寫此問題可能導(dǎo)致的結(jié)果。如Nowadays, though the awareness of protecting environment is being accepted by more and more people, we can still see many unpleasant scenes especially in scenic spots. Why does this phenomenon arise? Many factors are accounting for it. First and foremost, to some people, the consciousness of protecting environment is still not so strong. They may not think it is a big deal to throw rubbish everywhere. In addition, the environment management system isn’t so satisfying. For example, in some places there’re few regulations or the implementation is seldom performed actually.

　　最后一段提出解決問題的方案或者措施，如From what has been discussed above, it is urgent to take some effective and relative measures. In the first place, we should continue to conduct more propaganda in communities and schools so as to let people realize the importance of protecting the environment. In the second, more rules should be made and carried out by the government to restrain the conduction of destroying the environment. People should work together to create clean and beautiful surroundings.

　　大作文描圖部分是能力展現(xiàn)最佳的地方也是最容易出現(xiàn)錯誤的地方，大家切不可粗心大意。第二部分是闡述觀點(diǎn)的論述段落，因?yàn)槲覀兠總€人看待事物的角度不同，那我們論述時入手的角度就會有所不同，如因果論述、意義闡述、對比論證等等。但所有的論述要有根有節(jié)，章法自然。最后一段闡述自己的觀點(diǎn)即可。

　　英語一的大作文關(guān)注點(diǎn)就是這幾個方面，雖然我們在強(qiáng)調(diào)反壓題，但是事實(shí)就是事實(shí)，關(guān)注點(diǎn)就是關(guān)注點(diǎn)。我們主要的備考方面還是不會變的，希望大家不要在最后亂了陣腳。