2017考研英語小作文批改范文：感謝信

復(fù)習(xí)緊張，焦頭爛額？逆風(fēng)輕襲，來跨考秋季集訓(xùn)營，幫你尋方法，定方案！ 了解一下>>

0-4分

第一篇

Dear teacher,

I am writing to extend my sincere gratitude for your help to improve my English. If it had not been for your assistance in the respect of English writing, I fear that I would have been so outstanding achievement.

Every one agrees that it was you who are kindness and duty.It seems that you don’t feel tired forever. Again, I would like to express my warm thanks to you! Please accept my gratitude.

Yours sincerely,

Li Ming

點(diǎn)擊進(jìn)入咨詢解答<<<<

修改意見：

Dear teacher,

I am writing to extend my sincere gratitude for your help to improve my English. If it had not been for your assistance in the respect of English writing(in 后面應(yīng)該加動名詞，此外，respect 是尊敬的意思，用詞不當(dāng)), I fear that I would have been so outstanding achievement.(這句話是虛擬語氣，意思是如果不是你的幫助，我恐怕將會…)

Every one agrees that it was you who are kindness and duty(it was…who…是個強(qiáng)調(diào)句，這句話的意思是每個人都說是你…例如幫助我)It seems that you don’t feel tired forever. Again, I would like to express my warm thanks to you! Please accept my gratitude.

Yours sincerely,

Li Ming

2分

微點(diǎn)評：英語的句號是.你的英語基礎(chǔ)比較薄弱，建議你多看看英語范文，背一些模版。

第二篇

Dear Elle,

I am writing to extend my sincere gratitude for you gave me help at the school party last Sunday. If it had not been for your assistance in you lend me your beautiful dress, I fear that I would have been appearing in once a year campus dancing party.

Everyone agrees that it was you who generously offered dress to me. Again, I would like to express my warm thanks to you! Please accept my gratitude.

Yours sincerely,

Li Ming

修改意見：

Dear Elle,

I am writing to extend my sincere gratitude for you gave me help(for 后面不能加句子，可改為your help) at the school party last Sunday. If it had not been for your assistance in you lend(改為 lending) me your beautiful dress, I fear that I would (加 not)have been appearing (appeared)in(改為at) once a year (可以用一個定語從句來修飾，此處刪掉)campus dancing party(加上 ,which is held only once every year ).

Every one agrees that it was you who generously offered(加the ) dress to me. Again, I would like to express my warm thanks to you! Please accept my gratitude.

Yours sincerely,

Li Ming

2分

微點(diǎn)評：第一段的最后一句話中，由于沒有寫not，使文章的意思完全相反，因此，一定要好好研究一下虛擬語氣的用法。另外，for 后面是不能加句子的。

第三篇

Dear Bob,

I am writing to extend my sincere gratitude for the help you give me about learning English. If it had not been for your assistance in a variety of activities including holding funny discussions with me, teaching me singing English songs, playing simple English games, and so on, I fear that I would have been searching a wrong and difficult way to learn English and feeling unhappy to learn it.

Every one agrees that it was you who give me many opportunities to speak English loudly, beacuse you know that I am so shy to talk with others by English. Your help raise my level of proficiency in English, and now I enjoy greatest interst in English both listening and writing.

Again, I would like to express my warm thanks to you! Please accept my gratitude.

Yours sincerely,

Li Ming

修改意見：

Dear Bob,

I am writing to extend my sincere gratitude for the help you give(改為gave) me about learning English. If it had not been for your assistance in (in 后面要加doing sth.)a variety of activities including(刪除) holding funny discussions with me, teaching me singing English songs,(加and) playing simple English games, and so on(刪除), I fear that I would have been searching(改為going) a wrong and difficult way to learn English and feeling unhappy to learn it(刪除).

Every one agrees that it was you who give(改為gave) me many opportunities to speak English loudly, (改為.because 首字母大寫)beacuse(拼寫錯誤，改為because) you know that I am so shy to talk with others by(改為in) English. Your help raise my level of proficiency(中式英語) in English, and now I enjoy ( have)greatest (改為great)interst(拼寫錯誤interest) in English both listening and writing.

Again, I would like to express my warm thanks to you! Please accept my gratitude.

Yours sincerely,

Li Ming

3分

微點(diǎn)評：標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號與后面的單詞之間空一格。嘆號后面的第一個單詞首字母也要大寫。單詞拼寫的錯誤盡量避免。建議你好好學(xué)習(xí)一下有關(guān)虛擬語氣的知識點(diǎn)，多讀一些英語文章，可有效杜絕中式英語。

第四篇

Dear Bob,

I am writing to extend my sincere gratitude for your warm help in the process of my seeking job conformed to my past decades training, after i graduated from peking university.

If it had not been for your assistance in recommendation to the prestigious company in China. i fear that i would have been on the job road back and forth .i really appreciate this precious opportunity ,which you offered. every one agrees that it was you who wrote a letter to the esteemed company boss, regarding as my qualifications ,education back –ground ,and my special skills at computer program which i have a huge intrest in. Again, I would like to express my warm thanks to you! please accept my gratitude.

修改意見：

Dear Bob,

I am writing to extend my sincere gratitude for your warm help in the process of my(刪除my) seeking job conformed to my past decades training, after i(大寫)graduated from peking university(兩個單詞的首字母大寫).

If it had not been for your assistance in recommendation (改為recommending)to the prestigious company in China. i(大寫)fear that i would have been on the job road (中式英語)back and forth .i really appreciate this precious oppotunity(拼寫錯誤opportunity) which you offered. every one(首字母大寫) agrees that it was you who wrote a letter to the esteemed company(刪除) boss, regarding as(刪除) my qualifications ,education back –ground ,and my special skills at computer program which i have a huge intrest in(刪除). Again, I would like to express my warm thanks to you! please(首字母大寫)accept my gratitude.

My sincerely,

Li Ming

4分

微點(diǎn)評：作文內(nèi)容很豐富，但是你的表達(dá)能力還有待提高，而且要注意書信的寫作格式，以及大小寫的問題。

第五篇

Dear Bob,

I am writing to extend my sincere gratitude for you to help me to improve my English during these days. If it had not been for your assistance in teaching me various knowledge including the culture of English, Then help me to practice English face to face, I fear that I would have been seek to the way of learning English for a long time without your help.

Everyone agrees that it was you who are warmly and likely to help others without the pay. Again，I would like to express my warm thanks to you! Please accept my gratitude.

修改意見：

Dear Bob,

I am writing to extend my sincere gratitude for you to help me to improve my English during these days. If it had not been for your assistance in teaching me various knowledge including the culture of English, Then(刪除) help(改為helping) me to practice English face to face, I fear that I would have been seek(改為seeking) to the way of learning English for a long time without your help.(刪除)

Every one agrees that it was you who are warmly and likely(likely 是很可能的意思)to help others without the pay(it was …who..是強(qiáng)調(diào)句，此句可以改為，it was you who are so warmly to help others for free). Again，I would like to express my warm thanks to you! Please accept my gratitude.

4分

微點(diǎn)評：寫完書信要有yours sincerely 和你的名字。英語的句號是.此外，建議你看一下關(guān)于強(qiáng)調(diào)句和虛擬語氣的知識。

5-7分

第一篇

Dear sir,

I am writing to extend my sincere gratitude for your kindness to lend me the umbrella. If it had not been for your assistance in lending the umbrella to me when it was raining，I fear that I would have been in trouble to get home.

Every one agrees that it was you who always helping others in trouble. Again，I would like to express my warm thanks to you! Please accept my gratitude.

Yours sincerely

修改意見：

Dear sir,

I am writing to extend my sincere gratitude for your kindness to lend me the umbrella. If it had not been for your assistance in lending the umbrella to me when it was raining，I fear that I would have been in trouble to get home.

Every one agrees that it was you who always helping(改為 helped) others in trouble. Again，I would like to express my warm thanks to you! Please accept my gratitude.

Yours sincerely(加逗號)

加名字

5分

微點(diǎn)評：小作文的字?jǐn)?shù)要求是100詞，不要少于100詞，否則是要扣分的。書信的寫作格式要牢記于心。要注意時態(tài)的一致性。雖然作文沒有什么大問題，但內(nèi)容過于簡單，其實(shí)你可以把內(nèi)容再擴(kuò)充一下，用一些高級的詞匯和句型。

第二篇

Dear Pro. Smith,

I am writing to extend my sincere gratitude for your assistance. If it had not been for your assistance in sending timely the list of reference books which I asked for, I fear that I would have not been achieved my essay on the deadline.

Everyone agrees that it was you who save munch valuable time for me to search the reference books in the library and these reference books which are rather professional conform to the requirements of my essay. Again, I would like to express my warm thanks to you! Please accept my gratitude.

Yours sincerely,

Li Ming

修改意見：

Dear Pro. Smith,

I am writing to extend my sincere gratitude for your assistance. If it had not been for your assistance in sending timely(刪掉)the list of reference books(加to me timely) which I asked for, I fear that I would have not been achieved my essay on(改為by ) the deadline.

Everyone agrees that it was you who save(改為saved) munch (拼寫錯誤，改為much)valuable time for me to search the reference books in the library and these reference books which are rather professional conform to the requirements of my essay. Again, I would like to express my warm thanks to you! Please accept my gratitude.

Yours sincerely,

Li Ming

6分

微點(diǎn)評：寫作文時要再細(xì)心一些，盡量避免單詞拼寫的錯誤。時態(tài)要保持前后一致。

第三篇

Dear Bob,

I am writing to extend my sincere gratitude for your warm reception in this travel abroad. If it had not been for your assistance in this traveling that you are as a guide for me, I fear that I would have been lost so that I cannot find the way coming back.

Everyone agrees that it was you who patiently guide me to every tourist attractions and explain some of peculiar stories about sceneries. Again, I would like to express my warm thanks to you! Please accept my gratitude.

Yours sincerely,

Li Ming

修改意見：

Dear Bob,

I am writing to extend my sincere gratitude for your warm reception in this travel (改為in the journey)abroad. If it had not been for your assistance in this traveling (改為on the trip)that you are as a guide for me, I fear that I would have been lost so that I cannot(改為couldn’t) find the way coming back.

Every one agrees that it was you who patiently guide(改為guided) me to every tourist attractions and explain some of peculiar stories about sceneries. Again, I would like to express my warm thanks to you! Please accept my gratitude.

Yours sincerely,

Li Ming

6分

微點(diǎn)評：作文寫得還不錯，但應(yīng)保持時態(tài)的前后一致以及固定搭配。

第四篇

Dear Ms. Wang,

I am writing to extend my sincere gratitude for your kindness help last week. If it had not been for your assistance in bringing me my admission card for examination in time, I fear that I would have been missed the opportunity to be a servant in the government which I have prepared for a long time.

Every one agrees that it was you who are my deliverer to save me from such troublesome situation. Again, I would like to express my warm thanks to you! Please accept my gratitude.

Yours sincerely,

Li Ming

修改意見：

Dear Ms. Wang,

I am writing to extend my sincere gratitude for your kindness(改為kind) help last week. If it had not been for your assistance in bringing me my admission card for examination in time, I fear that I would have been missed(改為missing) the opportunity to be a servant in the government which I have prepared for a long time.

Every one agrees that it was you who are(改為were) my deliverer to save me from such troublesome situation. Again, I would like to express my warm thanks to you! Please accept my gratitude.

Yours sincerely,

Li Ming

6分

微點(diǎn)評：寫作文時要再認(rèn)真一點(diǎn)，寫完后再檢查一遍，有些小錯就可以及時改正，另外，建議你去看一下虛擬語氣的句型。時態(tài)要保持一致。

第五篇

Dear Teacher,

I am writing to extend my sincere gratitude for your ongoing patience and selfless care. If it had not been for your assistance in our English study, I fear that I would have been failed my CET4 and CET6.

Even one agrees that it was you who has always been devoting most of your free time to day to day English teaching and instruction in test-taking skills. Again, I would like to express my warm thanks to you! Please accept my gratitude.

Yours sincerely,

Li Ming

修改意見：

Dear Teacher,

I am writing to extend my sincere gratitude for your ongoing patience and selfless care. If it had not been for your assistance in our English study, I fear that I would have been failed(改為failing)(加to pass) my CET4 and CET6.

Even one agrees that it was you who has(改為 had) always been devoting most of your free time to day to day English teaching and instruction(改為instructing) in test-taking skills. Again, I would like to express my warm thanks to you! Please accept my gratitude.

Yours sincerely,

Li Ming

7分

微點(diǎn)評：作文沒有什么大問題，但是要注意時態(tài)的一致以及某些句型的固定用法。

8-10分

第一篇

Dear Eleven,

I am writing to extend my sincere gratitude for your encouragement to me. If it had not been for your assistance in my Olympic Game in Maths. I fear that I would have been give it up early.

Every one agrees that it was you who encouraged me to persist on the game all the time and always helped me make a lot of preparations for the game, so I had the confidence in myself and won the game at last. Again, I would like to express my warm thanks to you! Please accept my gratitude.

Yours sincerely,

Li Ming

修改意見：

Dear Eleven,

I am writing to extend my sincere gratitude for your encouragement to me. If it had not been for your assistance in my (加上study of)Olympic Game in Maths(奧數(shù)是Mathematic Olympiad ). I fear that I would have been give(改為giving) it up early.

Every one agrees that it was you who encouraged me to persist on the game all the time and always helped me make a lot of preparations for the game, so I had the confidence in myself and won the game at last. Again, I would like to express my warm thanks to you! Please accept my gratitude.

Yours sincerely,

Li Ming

8分

第二篇

Dear Tommy,

I am writing to extend my sincere gratitude for you timely returning admission ticket to me.

If it had not been for your assistance in warmheartedly picking up my admission ticket and getting it back to me, I fear that I would have been missed my law exam held for once a year.

Every one agrees that it was you who came to help me and saved me from the trouble. Again, I would like to express my warm thanks to you! Please accept my gratitude.

Yours sincerely,

Jane Yang

修改意見：

Dear Tommy,

I am writing to extend my sincere gratitude for you timely returning admission ticket to me.

If it had not been for your assistance in warmheartedly picking up my admission ticket and getting it back to me, I fear that I would have been missed(改為missing) my law exam held for once a year.

Every one agrees that it was you who came to help me and saved me from the trouble. Again, I would like to express my warm thanks to you! Please accept my gratitude.

Yours sincerely,

Jane Yang

8分

微點(diǎn)評：作文寫得很不錯，但是要注意虛擬語氣的用法，建議再復(fù)習(xí)一下。

相關(guān)推薦
復(fù)習(xí)指導(dǎo)	2017考研公共課復(fù)習(xí)指導(dǎo)和做題方法匯總	二戰(zhàn)考生復(fù)習(xí)指導(dǎo)與經(jīng)驗(yàn)談匯總
考研時間	跨考教育整理—2017年考研時間表	2016考研真題及答案解析
復(fù)試分?jǐn)?shù)線	34所自主劃線高校歷年考研復(fù)試分?jǐn)?shù)線	歷年考研國家線匯總（跨考教育整理）

如今已進(jìn)入五月，2017年的考生已經(jīng)開始了緊張的復(fù)習(xí)，你是否還在糾結(jié)院校專業(yè)、復(fù)習(xí)無方向、心態(tài)沒有調(diào)整好，那么到底如何進(jìn)行考研這場大戰(zhàn)，并且在這場大戰(zhàn)中取得勝利呢？讓跨考資深咨詢老師來幫助你點(diǎn)擊進(jìn)入咨詢

2017考研信息交流群：329446765

【關(guān)注微信：kkkaoyan，找研友、找干貨、院校資料，1對1輔導(dǎo)預(yù)約，助力研途更順利】

會不定時贈送免費(fèi)課程，供考生參考復(fù)習(xí)。也可與研友進(jìn)行交流，共享考研信息與方法。