2014考研英語小作文批改例文：求職信（二）_跨考網(wǎng)

　　0-4分》》考研英語復習指導

　　第一篇

　　Dear Sir or Madam ,

　　I just read an advertisement in internet about recruitment information. I would like to apply for a position as Chinese teacher .

　　I understand what should be instruction study of children .My proficiency of skills, as described in the enclosed resume, are well suited to your requirement. I am a recent graduate of Beijing University with a graduate degree in Depatment of Chinese Launguage and Literature.In addition to having taken a broad range of courses, I served as senior middle school. .

　　I will be happy to meet with you at your convenience and discuss how my education and experience match. Thank you for your consideration.

　　Yours sincerely，

　　Li Ming

　　Dear Sir or Madam ,

　　I just read an advertisement in internet about recruitment information. I would like to apply for a position as (加a)Chinese teacher .

　　I understand what should be instruction study of children (不能理解你的意思).My proficiency of(改為proficient) skills, as described in the enclosed resume, are well suited to your requirement. I am a recent graduate of Beijing University with a graduate degree in Depatment of Chinese Launguage and Literature(這里填專業(yè)名稱).In addition to having taken a broad range of courses, I served as(serve as 后面加職位名稱) senior middle school. .

　　I will be happy to meet with you at your convenience and discuss how my education and experience match. Thank you for your consideration.

　　Yours sincerely，

　　Li Ming

　　4分

　　同學你好，標點符號與后面的單詞要空一格。你需要提高英語的表達能力，另外，你對模版也不熟悉，建議你多看一些英語作文，熟悉一下這類作文的寫作思路。

　　第二篇

　　Dear sir or madam,

　　I am writing this letter to apply for a position of secretary.

　　I am a student of Beijing University. I will graduate from Business English major in June 2013.Because of my major, I have been studying English all the time. Now I could communication with foreigner fluently. Also I was past the test for English Majors-Brand eight. Moreover, I had past national computer test brand three before I enter university. I can skilled operate the majority of office software.

　　Please give me a(改為an) interview. Connect me with number 123456.I am looking forward to your reply.

　　Yours sincerely,

　　Li Ming

　　Dear sir or madam,

　　I am writting(拼寫錯誤，改為writing) this letter(刪除) to apply for a position of(改為as) secretary.

　　I am a student of Beijing University. I will graduate from Business English major in June 2013.Because of my major, I have been studying English all the time. Now I could comunication(改為communicate)with foreigner fluently. Also I was past(改為passed) the test for English Majors-Brand eight. Moreover, I had past(改為passed) national computer test brand three before I enter(加ed) university. I can skilled(改為skillfully) operate the majority of office software(加s).

　　Please give me a(改為an) interview. Connect me with number 123456.I am looking forward to your reply.

　　Yours sincerely,

　　Li Ming

　　2分

　　同學你好，你的英語基礎比較薄弱，還是建議你多背模版，另外，你的應聘職位最好能與你的專業(yè)和工作經(jīng)歷相關。