2015考研英語寫作范文指導(dǎo)（1）_跨考網(wǎng)

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　　Directions: Write an essay based on the following chart. In your essay, you should

　　1) interpret the chart, and

　　2) give your comments。

　　You should write about 150 words on the ANSWER SHEET. (15points)

　　簡析：

　　總體上，本次大作文較為簡單，考生可以直接參考2010年英語二真題大作文手機訂購的模式。

　　首段應(yīng)為圖表描述。圖表描述本質(zhì)是：相同事物寫變化，不同事物寫對比差異。因此，圖畫描述段可以寫城鄉(xiāng)人口各自的變化，亦可寫城鄉(xiāng)人口各個年份的差異。

　　二段可以從多個角度進行評論分析，如原因、現(xiàn)象、意義利弊等。當(dāng)然，較為簡單的原因分析。鄉(xiāng)村人口下降的原因可以想到國家政策的影響、經(jīng)濟發(fā)展使得一部分富裕家庭遷往城市生活。城市吸引人的地方在于其較為完好的教育、醫(yī)療、就業(yè)和其他公共服務(wù)。

　　尾段評論建議即可。如，建議政府關(guān)注城市人口膨脹的問題和縮小城鄉(xiāng)差距。

　　范文如下：

　　首段：圖表描述

　　Given is a column chart which clearly illustrates the striking contrasts between population in urban and rural areas of China from 1990 to 2010. During these two decades, the rural population descended moderately, from its peak at approximately 820,000,000 in 1990 to about 660,000,000 in 2010; however, the number of urban people showed a sharp rise/ increase, from 300,000,000 in 1990 to a little more than 660,000,000 in 2010.

　　二段：原因分析

　　Such a scenario can be naturally associated with the urbanization of China, but what resulted in these differences? To my understanding, at least two fundamental causes can account for this phenomenon. For one thing, in recent years, China was best characterized by its speedy economic development and its policy in controlling population, which enabled more families in countryside to have only one kid and some rich families move to cities. For another, compared with rural areas, education, hospitals, employment and other public services in cities are better; therefore, cities attract more people to reside.

　　三段：評論建議

　　Accordingly, it is advisable for governments / authorities to focus more eyesight on the problems caused by population expansion in cities. Meanwhile, it is essential for them to work out comprehensive strategies to shorten the gap between urban and rural areas.

　　譯文：

　　所給是一個柱狀圖，清晰展示了1990年至2010年間中國城鄉(xiāng)人口的顯著差異。在這二十年中，鄉(xiāng)村人口平穩(wěn)下降，從1990的高峰值約820000000人降至2010的約660000000人;相反，城市人口數(shù)量表現(xiàn)出較為明顯的增長，從1990年約300000000增長至2010的略高于660000000.

　　這種情景自然而然能自然聯(lián)系到中國的城鎮(zhèn)化，但是什么導(dǎo)致了這些差異?在我看來，至少兩個原因可以解釋這種現(xiàn)象。一方面，近些年，中國的是突出特征在于其經(jīng)濟的飛速發(fā)展和人口控制政策，這使得更多農(nóng)村家庭只有一個孩子而且一些富裕家庭搬往城市。另一方面，與鄉(xiāng)村相比，城鎮(zhèn)的教育、醫(yī)院、就業(yè)和其他公共服務(wù)更優(yōu)越;因此，城市吸引了更多的人定居。

　　因此，政府應(yīng)該更多關(guān)注城市人口膨脹帶來的諸多問題。同時，他們有必要制定綜合策略去縮小城鄉(xiāng)差距。