2017考研英語一作文真題答案解析（跨考版）

　　51.【題干】direction: You are to write an email to James Cook, a newly-arrived Australia professor, recommending some tourist attractions in your city .Please give reason for your recommendation.

　　You should write nearly on the answer sheet.

　　Dot not sign your own name at the end of the email .use "Li Ming" instead.

　　Do not write the address. (10 points)

　　【答案】

　　參考范文：

　　Dear Prof. James Cook,

　　Welcome to China. I know you love traveling, so I’m writing this letter to recommend to you one of my favorite scenic spot—Harbin, which is an old northern city of China.

　　I think you must like it for the reasons as follows. To begin with, there are an amount of beautiful scenic spots, such as the Ice and Snow Kingdom in winter, the Sun island, the Central Street and so on. In addition, you could taste a great number of snacks on the average street. Last but not least, the people of Harbin are overwhelmingly hospitable and enthusiastic, which is famous all over China.

　　Owing to the reasons discussed above, I won’t hesitate to recommend this scenic spot to you. I am sure you will enjoy it. Best wishes for you!

　　Yours sincerely,

　　Li Ming

　　真題解析

　　今年英語一的小作文不出預(yù)料，再一次考查到了推薦信。在英語一的考試當(dāng)中，推薦信已經(jīng)考查過兩年了。例如我們英語一在2011年就考查過向你的朋友推薦一部電影。具體題目要求是Write a letter to a friend of yours to1) recommend one of your favorite movies and;2) give reasons for your recommendation. 2015年考察的是you are going to hold a club reading session. Write an email of about 100 words recommending a book to the club members.You should state reasons for your recommendation. 而今年的作文題目要求給新來的澳大利亞國籍教授James Cook介紹你城市的tourist attraction。因此，考生不用驚慌只要把2011年或2015年的小作文，主要是推薦原因部分，稍作修改即可成文。這就啟發(fā)我們2018屆的同學(xué)們要高度重視歷年真題，因?yàn)榭歼^的話題或是書信類型會反復(fù)考查。

　　那么今年的作文具體該如何來寫呢?今年考題的Direction要求向新來的James Cook教授推薦旅游景點(diǎn)。根據(jù)題目的要求，我們可以判斷本文為公務(wù)信函，語域?yàn)檎秸Z域，即不能出現(xiàn)縮寫、省略問句和和口語表達(dá)。

　　稱呼： Dear Prof. James Cook, 注意稱呼中，Prof后面的句點(diǎn)不能丟，稱呼最后的逗號號不可丟，也不能寫成冒號。當(dāng)然如果稱呼不寫Prof. 寫成Mr. James Cook 也是可以的。

　　正文

　　第一段：寫作內(nèi)容需涵蓋兩點(diǎn)：1：歡迎Cook 教授來中國;2：寫信目的，表明推薦。 用到了這樣的表達(dá)Welcome to China. I know you love traveling, so I’m writing this letter to recommend to you one of my favorite scenic spot- Harbin, which is an old northern city of China.

　　第二段： 寫作內(nèi)容為推薦原因。可以從三個角度來考慮：美景、美食和熱情的人們。用到了這樣的表達(dá)：I think you must like it for the reasons as follows. To begin with, there are an amount of beautiful scenic spots, such as the Ice and Snow Kingdom in winter, the Sun island, the Central Street and so on. In addition, you could taste a great number of snacks on the average street. Last but not least, the people of Harbin are overwhelmingly hospitable and enthusiastic, which is famous all over China.

　　第三段：再次強(qiáng)調(diào)寫信目的。Owing to the reasons discussed above, I won’t hesitate to recommend this scenic spot to you. I am sure you will enjoy it. 最后，表達(dá)祝福 Best wishes for you!

　　落款： Yours sincerely, 特別提醒sincerely后面逗號不能丟;

　　簽名： Li Ming特別注意 Ming 后面一定不能出現(xiàn)句點(diǎn)。 落款和前面左、右對齊都可

　　52.【題干】Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following pictures. In your essay, you should

　　1) describe the pictures briefly.

　　2) interrupt the meaning, and

　　3) give your comments

　　You should write neatly on the ANSWER SHEET (20 points)

　　【答案】

　　參考范文

　　As is symbolically mirrored in the caricatures, there emerge two circumstances, carrying sharp contrast implications. In the first cartoon, a fashionable boy, lying in his sling chair comfortably, is looking at his whole shelf of books and saying, “I possess a multitude of books”. On the contrary, the second portrayal demonstrates an industrious student who is sitting in front of the desk and makes a realistic plan that he would like to finish reading 20 books in total within a year.

　　The author of the cartoon invites us to focus on a truth that endless plans paralyze actions. There are simply no great success and achievements in the world that are not achieved through hard work and diligence. Similarly, a dream can be realized when you decide to work for it and persist continuously. Everyone desires to succeed, but not all his dreams can come true until he works hard to implement his plans. People give up their dreams for this or that reason. Those whose dreams become true have at least one thing in common, that is, they always hold fast to their dreams and always keep their feet on the ground. Just around us, for instance, the athletes who gain the gold medals, the artists who are prevalent with the public, and even the students who enter the university after years of hard study and preparation, are all dream-holders.

　　Accordingly, to succeed, we need to spare no efforts and hold fast to your dreams just as our nation sticks to our Chinese Dream. The path to dreams may not be smooth and wide, and even some sacrifices are needed, but hold on to the end, you will find there is no greater happiness than making your dream come true.

　　真題解析

　　今年的英語一大作文題可以說完全在我們的預(yù)料之中，甚至比我們想象的要簡單的多，據(jù)廣大考生反映審題基本不存在問題。雖然考研圖畫作文，從來不給一個主題，但是對于考生來說，正確審出主題還是相對比較容易實(shí)現(xiàn)的。

　　值得關(guān)注的是，今年考題反映的是我們常說的那句話：理想很豐滿，現(xiàn)實(shí)很骨感。如何跨越理想和現(xiàn)實(shí)的鴻溝，這是一個長久以來一直討論的話題。這里完全可以結(jié)合考研真題中的個人品質(zhì)類話題，談一談實(shí)現(xiàn)理想所需要的精神。那么此話題中很多表達(dá)方式，寫作方式都與過去的真題如2007年的自信心缺乏、2012年的悲觀與樂觀等真題作文如出一轍。所以真題是最寶貴的復(fù)習(xí)資源!2016年跨考各類考研寫作課程均對真題進(jìn)行過詳細(xì)講解，相信今年英語一的同學(xué)面對此作文應(yīng)會從容不迫。

　　我們簡單來看看如何審這兩副圖，左邊的圖片中，一個學(xué)生坐在躺椅里悠哉悠哉，看著自己有許多書卻沒說讀上哪怕一本;右邊的圖片中，一位勤奮的學(xué)生拿著一本書仔細(xì)讀著，并且很現(xiàn)實(shí)地計(jì)劃著一年?duì)幦∽x完20本書。圖表描述參考如下：As is symbolically mirrored in the caricatures, there emerge two circumstances, carrying sharp contrast implications. In the first cartoon, a fashionable boy , lying in his sling chair comfortably, is looking at his whole shelf of books and says, “I possess a multitude of books”. On the contrary, the second portrayal demonstrates an industrious student who is sitting in front of the desk and makes a realistic plan that he would like to finish reading 20 books in total within a year.

　　第二段可以從兩方面來論證，一方面強(qiáng)調(diào)如果只有想法而不行動是不利于理想的實(shí)現(xiàn)，另一方面從正面論證腳踏實(shí)地一步一步完成理想的道理。參考如下：The author of the cartoon invites us to focus on a truth that endless plans paralyze actions. There are simply no great success and achievements in the world that are not achieved through hard work and diligence. Similarly, a dream can be realized when you decide to work for it and persist continuously. Everyone desires to succeed, but not all his dreams can come true until he works hard to implement his plans. People give up their dreams for this or that reason. Those whose dreams become true have at least one thing in common, that is, they always hold fast to their dreams and always keep their feet on the ground. Just around us, for instance, the athletes who gain the gold medals, the artists who are prevalent with the public, and even the students who enter the university after years of hard study and preparation, are all dream-holders。.

　　第三段給出結(jié)論，簡單提兩條建議即可。比如：Accordingly, to succeed, we need to spare no efforts and hold fast to your dreams just as our nation sticks to our Chinese Dream. The path to dreams may not be smooth and wide, and even some sacrifices are needed, but hold on to the end,you will find there is no greater happiness than making your dream come true.

　　當(dāng)然，考研寫作判卷原則是：語言第一位、結(jié)構(gòu)第二位、內(nèi)容第三位。只要語言基本正確、結(jié)構(gòu)比較清晰、內(nèi)容與話題相關(guān)，均可取得及格分(12分)。如果語言精彩、結(jié)構(gòu)嚴(yán)謹(jǐn)、論證充分，則可穩(wěn)獲高分(15分以上)。

　　總體來說，今年的大作文寫作難度適中。雖然有些考生由于考場緊張、可能論述無邏輯，有些同學(xué)將關(guān)鍵詞拼寫錯誤。其實(shí)無需過于焦慮，閱卷教師主要考察整體語言水平，不會因?yàn)閭€別錯誤完全降為低分。只要語言基本正確、結(jié)構(gòu)比較清晰，均可取得不錯的成績。