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　　You want to contribute to Project Hope by offering financial aid to a child in a remote area. Write a letter to the department concerned, asking them to help find a candidate. You should specify what kind of child you want to help and how you will carry out your plan.

　　Don't sign your own name...."Li Ming" instead. Don't write the address.

　　To whom it may concern,

　　I wish to contribute to Project Hope by offering financial aid to a child in a remote area. Having conceived such a plan for a long period, I write this letter to request your help to recommend a candidate.

　　I wonder if it is convenient for you if two things concerning the child are taken into consideration. First, the child should come from Gui Zhou Province because I intend to help a child from my hometown. Second, it will be better if the child is a primary school student. Actually, I am good at teaching mathematics at elementary level.

　　My plan will be carried out as follows. First, I will remit at least 300 yuan in cash every month so as to reduce the financial burden of the family. More importantly, I decide to teach the child math and English in person during my summer vacation, which will surely be more beneficial to the child.

　　I really appreciate your help, and I look forward to your reply as soon as possible.

　　Yours sincerely,

　　Li Ming

　　感謝信

　　Directions:

　　Your delegation (代表團(tuán))has just returned from a visit to a university in Great Britain. And you were warmly treated there by Professor Herthwell. Please write a letter to express your thanks to him for his hospitality and hope for further cooperation.

　　Dear Prof. Herthwell, (告訴了名字，又知道是教授，最好這么稱(chēng)呼)

　　I am writing this letter to express my sincere gratitude for your kind hospitality you showed to our delegation during our visit in your university.(寫(xiě)信意圖：感謝對(duì)方的熱情招待)

　　I am indebted to your generous help to our visit. It was nice of you to introduce me to so many of your famous professors at your university. In addition, we appreciate the accommodation you provided for us. We had a fantastic time in Britain and will never forget it. (感激內(nèi)容：鑒于這是感謝信，內(nèi)容發(fā)生在過(guò)去，在這里套用I would be grateful if you would take …into consideration是不太合適的。用關(guān)聯(lián)詞1，2，3也顯得呆板。于是調(diào)整了一下，大意是：

　　我感激你的慷慨幫助。你介紹了很多教授給我認(rèn)識(shí)。另外，(IN ADDITION，不用1，2，3了)，提供的住宿很好，我們很爽，絕對(duì)不會(huì)忘記)(注意時(shí)態(tài))

　　Meanwhile, I hope you will someday pay a short visit to our university and give us some lectures on “Modern Western Economics”. (這句是提綱要求 hope for further cooperation.不寫(xiě)的話嚴(yán)重扣分) (或者I would be grateful if you would pay a short visit to our university)If you have interest in our university, please feel free to contact me for more information.

　　Yours Sincerely

　　Li Ming

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　　詢(xún)問(wèn)信

　　Directions: You want to study at a certain foreign university. Write a letter to ask about the situation there as regards what qualifications one needs for acceptance, fees, possible scholarships, and accommodation.

　　Dear Sir or Madam,

　　I am a Chinese student who wishes to apply for admission into your prestigious university. My plan is to start my course next term, and I would be grateful if you would be kind enough to provide me with certain essential information.

　　First, what qualifications do I need to follow a course of study at your university? I have already had a bachelor’s degree from Beijing University, but I wonder if there are any further academic requirements. Second, how much are the tuition fees? Although I intend to be self-supporting, I would be interested to hear if there are any scholarships available for international students. Third, what is the situation regarding accommodation?

　　I look forward to your reply, and to attending your esteemed institution.

　　Yours sincerely,

　　Li Ming